This is my first-ever oneshot, featuring Yoshimitsu and Alisa. It's a story of a rather cerebral experience. I hope you enjoy it!
Singularis
Rated: T
Genre: Sci-Fi/Drama
Chapters: 1
Status: Complete
Characters: Yoshimitsu, Alisa Bosconovich, Dr. Bosconovich
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~*~ Singularis ~*~
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~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Aozame32 on Thu Apr 19, 2012 5:04 am
"Yoshimitsu. He's a good guy, but you can't exactly go hang out with the dude and expect to make it through a night without at least getting chased by the police."
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Voldomino on Sun Apr 22, 2012 2:49 pm
Absolutely great, your writing skills are amazing. I love the passage where you describe the "fusion" between Alisa and Yoshimitsu and all the feelings that come up from that.
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Aozame32 on Sun Apr 22, 2012 8:38 pm
Wow, Voldomino! ![[blushing]](./images/smilies/blushing.gif "blushing")
Thank you! You know, that really means a lot to me. As you can imagine, I don't really get a lot of feedback, so it feels really good to get some unexpected input from someone. I really appreciate it! 
Thank you! You know, that really means a lot to me. As you can imagine, I don't really get a lot of feedback, so it feels really good to get some unexpected input from someone. I really appreciate it! "Yoshimitsu. He's a good guy, but you can't exactly go hang out with the dude and expect to make it through a night without at least getting chased by the police."
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by LonerHero on Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:54 pm
why do I always feel jealous when I see someone has great writing skills this reminds me in school when I want to challenge some one in writing stuff...
Anyway you are really good at making one shots Aoz well done
Anyway you are really good at making one shots Aoz well done
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Aozame32 on Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:36 pm
Thank, MishimaStar! That's really nice of you to say! ^,^ But I've got a long way to go before I'm any good. 
If you want to read some great oneshots, you need to check out Psychoblue's work. He's awesome.
But, yeah, I'm glad you liked it. I was afraid no one was going to like it. XD
If you want to read some great oneshots, you need to check out Psychoblue's work. He's awesome.But, yeah, I'm glad you liked it. I was afraid no one was going to like it. XD
"Yoshimitsu. He's a good guy, but you can't exactly go hang out with the dude and expect to make it through a night without at least getting chased by the police."
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by James on Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:56 pm
Oh wow, this is Fantastic! It really kept me on the edge of my seat. It was pretty shocking when Yoshimitsu and Alisa became the same person, and even I felt relieved when the download had finally completed! ![[lol]](./images/smilies/laugh.gif "[laugh]")
Fantastic writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Fantastic writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Aozame32 on Fri Jun 29, 2012 6:44 am
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it!
I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it!"Yoshimitsu. He's a good guy, but you can't exactly go hang out with the dude and expect to make it through a night without at least getting chased by the police."
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Chaos_Keeper23 on Sun Aug 19, 2012 3:23 am
*clicks the link*
*reads story*
'_' --> 0.0 ---> O.O
*finishes*
(i'm s-speechless) *chokes*
THINKS:"if only i was born with amazing story-writing skills as Ao, i'd be set for life" :'(
Thinks again: (when's the nxt chapter? i can hardly wait!!!!!!!!!)
you told the story with such amazing vividness and detail that i can almost see and touch everything i read!
Singularis, you just made my day!![[clap]](./images/smilies/clap.gif "clapping")
*reads story*
'_' --> 0.0 ---> O.O
*finishes*
(i'm s-speechless) *chokes*
THINKS:"if only i was born with amazing story-writing skills as Ao, i'd be set for life" :'(
Thinks again: (when's the nxt chapter? i can hardly wait!!!!!!!!!)
you told the story with such amazing vividness and detail that i can almost see and touch everything i read!
Singularis, you just made my day!
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Aozame32 on Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:02 am
Oh wow! LOL! I admit that I'm always a little surprised when someone reads this story and gives me such enthusiastic feedback. Thank you so much!
Since this is a one-shot, I won't be making and new chapters for it, but I have a feeling that I might do another one in the near future. It was certainly fun to write, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Since this is a one-shot, I won't be making and new chapters for it, but I have a feeling that I might do another one in the near future. It was certainly fun to write, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
"Yoshimitsu. He's a good guy, but you can't exactly go hang out with the dude and expect to make it through a night without at least getting chased by the police."
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by buffdaddy on Sat Jan 05, 2013 12:14 am
yooooo i love this piece amazing work , very unique , i love ur writing style.
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Re: ~*~ Singularis ~*~
by Aozame32 on Sat Jan 05, 2013 5:35 pm
Oh hey! I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for such positive feedback.
If you want me to read any of your work, just send me a PM.
Thanks for such positive feedback.If you want me to read any of your work, just send me a PM.
"Yoshimitsu. He's a good guy, but you can't exactly go hang out with the dude and expect to make it through a night without at least getting chased by the police."
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